No problem! :)
PLOT: I like it. Mostly I would not even look at romance rp’s but I feel like the concept is well thought-out. However, because this is a 10x10 RP you have to make sure that your roleplayers will be committed to the roleplay till the end. I feel that the little plot on the main page is written in a way that will reel people in and make them interested, which is always a good thing. Only thing is - I would clarify somewhere how exactly the roleplay starts once you open etc. :)
CHARACTERS: While I like the character biographies and their lengths are good, I would try to incorporate their personality traits into the bio itself because as it is, they give more background information to some characters but the only time when we find out what they are like is at the very end where traits are listed.
OVERALL: I think the concept is very interesting and it can be very good if you pull it off successfully.
Best of luck!
-Wonder Girl
I’m glad I could help! (:
-Wonder Girl
Uhmm you mean like American states and towns? Can’t help you with the states here, I’m not from the US and I know only a tiny bit about their geography. However, here are some towns I think could be used (does not necessarily mean they have never been used):
- Washington, D.C.
- Miami
- Las Vegas
- Atlanta
- Honolulu
- Anchorage
- San Diego
- Baltimore
- Boston
Hope this answers your question!
-Wonder Girl
PLOT: I’m very confused as to what the focus of this roleplay is. Is it the high school? Is it the city? I think you need to be more specific or clearer about this. However, what I do like is that when I first read the plot (and didn’t see that it was a glee family rp) it didn’t give right away that it was another glee rp which is a good thing. I think you have a good thing going on plot-wise and I feel like glee is just a small aspect of it (which i think is cleverly done).
CHARACTERS: It’s nice that you also add bios for the show-canons, I’ve seen some admins not doing that. The bios are alright but I feel like you could have added more into them.
OVERALL: Though I was very confused at first, I feel that you have all the right intentions in mind and that you are serious about this RP.
Best of luck!
-Wonder Girl
PLOT: original! That’s already a big plus. It’s probably fine for most people as most RPers are from PST/EST but for Europeans like myself, it was a little bit confusing because I’ve never heard of such a station. Or is it fictional? I’m not quite sure. Maybe give a little bit more background about it?
CHARACTERS: The bios are organized nicely but I feel like there is a little bit of an inconsistency with length. You should try to be more consistent into that. Also, another thing you could do for future bios is to incorporate more of the character traits into the bios themselves.
OVERALL: It’s original and not yet another high school teen RP. I think it’s a great idea though most probably I would not join it myself.
Best of luck!
-Wonder Girl
Hello! So, I was wondering if you could make me a few graphics… My role play is about 4 people who have been kidnapped to be slaves. It’s a Glee RP and the FC’s:
Rachel Berry: FC Lea Michele
Quinn Fabray: FC Dianna Agron
Santana Lopez: FC Naya Rivera
Kurt Hummel: FC Chris Colfer
Noah Puck Puckerman: FC Mark Salling
Finn Hudson: FC Cory Monteith
Blaine Anderson: FC Darren Criss
If you need a better perspective on the plot, you can find it right here
So I really really hope you can do this, if you need any info on what I want or anything, do message me. Thanks love!
Sorry! I don’t make graphics and KF and Z haven’t been on for a while and they are the ones that are good with photoshop. However, check HERE, she might be able to help you (:
-Wonder Girl
Alex Pettyfer and Hunter Parrish
-Wonder Girl
- Lily Collins
- Kristen Stewart
- Ginnifer Godwin
- Isabelle Fuhrman?
- Emma Roberts
- Malese Jow
Hope this helps!
-Wonder Girl
No problem!
Girls:
- Crystal Reed
- Nina Dobrev
- Allie Gonino
- AnnaSophia Robb
- Willa Holland
- Troian Bellisario
Guys:
- Colton Haynes
- Alex Pettyfer
- River Viiperi
- Francisco Lachowski
- Max Irons
Hope this helps!
-Wonder Girl